Before we can write a great paragraph, we need to learn what a good sentence looks like. We've been doing lots of thinking about sentences. We need to learn how to write interesting sentences to make our readers want to read our writing.
This post is here so we can come back and revise our learning any time we want to.
We are learning to (WALT):
recognise and write
different kinds of sentences
Sucess Criteria (SC): We can write different
kinds of sentences correctly.
We can write a complex
sentence beginning with a verb.
We’ve learnt that there are 3
kinds of sentences:
- Simple sentences
- Compound sentences
- Complex sentences
And we are pretty good at writing simple and compound sentences already, but we've looked at these again to help us make comparisons with these and complex sentences. Here's some of what we worked on.
A simple sentence features:
Punctuation - Capital letter at the
beginning and full stop at the end. If it’s a question it has a question
mark and if it is said with excitement, has an exclamation mark.
It contains one idea (clause) and
has a subject, verb and object.
Daniel jumped off his bike.
Subject verb object
A compound sentence features:
Punctuation - Capital letter at the
beginning and end punctuation.
It contains two ideas (clause)
joined by a conjunction.
Daniel jumped off his bike and pushed it up the path.
Subject verb object conjunction verb object
A complex sentence features:
Punctuation - Capital letter at the
beginning and end punctuation.
It contains two or more ideas
(clause/s) joined by a conjunction.
Running late for the game, Caitlyn jumped out of the car and ran for the court.
It contains two or more ideas or
thought (clause/s) joined by a conjunction.
It contains 1 dependent clause and a
complete, compound sentence.
Running late for the game, Caitlyn jumped out of the car and
ran for the court.
Dependent Clauses: do not make sense
on their own. They need to be joined to another complete clause.
‘Running late for the game’, on it’s own does not make sense.
We are waiting for more to come to make it a complete sentence.
‘Caitlyn jumped out of the car and
ran for the court’ is a complete thought and makes sense
on it’s own. It is a complete sentence so we can add the dependent clause
to it.
Here are some examples of independent
clauses
(blue):
Tara ate a cheese roll after she watched the news.
(Tara ate a cheese roll is an
independent clause. It works as a standalone sentence.)
My mother is originally from Wellington although now lives in Palmerston
North.
I went for a run before my breakfast.
Examples of Dependent Clauses (purple)
Tara ate a cheese roll after she watched the news.
(The clause after she watched the
news is a dependent clause. It does not work as a standalone sentence.)
Even though his mother was a driving
instructor,
my cousin failed his driving test six times.
A computer once beat me at chess but was no match for me at kick boxing.
Writing a complex sentence beginning with a VERB
The ‘-ing’ sentence starter …
beginning with a verb
Ambling along the path, Dante
noticed something shining on the ground.
Your turn:
(this
is where we all had a go at writing some sentences)